Gentlesky fills
Allabove
As an umbrella
Over greenbelow
Skymusic
From swoopswans
Hits ears of earthbound
Carelisteners
The involved
That sit quiet
On mountainposts
Slowclouds
Drift northby
Propelled as highships
In the blueocean
Changing shape
To the rhythm
Of the swoopswan
Sweetsound
And it rains
On the thirstygreen
Meadowmen
this is a very original piece of art here! The way you slew your words together was very ingenious and gave the whole thing charm. Darn! Wish I would have thought of it ;-)
Sweet, sweet style. You have charisma, my friend. What a beautiful poem. Meadowmen. awesome!!