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By The Sea
One shell is transparent one opaque
Her hand is shaking
Future paths under her moon
Indecision crushes the waves
Counts the sands
Watches the tide flow in and out
Breathes
One shell is transparent one opaque
Her hand is shaking
Future paths under her moon
Indecision crushes the waves
Counts the sands
Watches the tide flow in and out
Breathes
Very beautiful. I have been reading your poetry and I must say that I have enjoyed all that I have read. I have been having trouble getting the critique page to come-up. I will read more. I will critique more too. Thanks for sharing.
This is a seemingly peaceful poem. I really like it. Wendy
I really like the words and feelings in this piece of work.... well written.... I like the style in which it was written....