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MISSING THE ONE WHO HAS MY HEART
A new day begins,
And hope springs fresh,
In the heart.
The birds are out and chirping,
Yet mankind is still asleep,
I miss the one I so much love:
The "poetess" who has my heart.
A new day begins,
And hope springs fresh,
In the heart.
The birds are out and chirping,
Yet mankind is still asleep,
I miss the one I so much love:
The "poetess" who has my heart.
Short and sweet
Dear Naveed,
One thing I have learnt reading and writing poetry now for a while, the shorter poems have a more profound impact and that is true of this poem. I like it and will be reviewing others as well ISA
just three words here..........
THE LUCKY WICH!................am I jealous? Nevah Nevah Nevah! and now is where you should post a famous Shakespearian line, " ME THINKS THE LADY DOTH PROTEST TOO MUCH" smiles ,Loved the poem Sir Poet, truly I loved it...............Ya know right, if I had the balls I'd have made that W a B winks....... but ur a scary dude so I was not about to be so brazen........ winks big, you know who, so why type it!!!!!!!!!!!!!
IT IS NOT POSSIBLE TO COMMENT ON YOUR REVIEW
To be fair and honest with you O Pale Winged Poetess, it is not possible to comment on your review, because you puzzle me with your words --- some of which are full of double meanings. Anyway, I thank you from the depths of my heart, mind and soul for the critique....Oh God Almighty! You really stir me up....I hope now you can understand what I mean.
Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.
Pen name:Emmenay.
Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7
Initials: M.N. Ahmed.
duhhhhhh geeeeeee Tennessee I've no idea what you mean!
smiles fondly, Don't you love it when I play dumb? winks big. Your comment/non comment gave me quite a chuckle I must confess. Stir you up? what are you a double mocha latte and I a coffee stirrer? lol............ please don't hate me now cause I'm so beautiful........ ( my best Rachal Ward accent there.............) glad you found such um stimulation from my measely little tongue in cheek comment. Oh and you are good you even picked up on my carefully placed double meanings.......... yummy........... you know who,so I won't type it...............
poem
HAVEN'T READ YOU FOR A LONG LONG TIME. nICE SHORT VERSE.
EVEN I MISSED YOU HEATHER. THANKS A LOT.
So nice to see you back Heather. I am pleased to read your comments. Thanks a lot for the same and do stay in touch and God willing, even I will review some of your poetry. Thanks once more.
Muhammad Naveed Ahmed.
Pen name:Emmenay.
Yahoo email ID:Ambitious7
Initials: M.N. Ahmed.