Dreaming

I was thinking I will never be fine, 

Cause I feel the tide going to sea,

In my mind I'm sorting lies,

Guess it depends who's talking to me...

 

Lucid daydreaming through the days of my life,

I'd say I'm feeling tuned in, but that'd be lies,

My body is present, But I live in the past, 

 

Liqour tippin, Smoke is mixin, But I never feel high,

Drugs to escape, But I can't run from my mind,

I'm ready to sail, but theres no clothe on the mast.

 

 

allets's picture

"...But I live in the past..."

I liked the caesura and the transition that carries the reader to where you want them to go. Cool write  -  slc


 

 

Emissary's picture

Thank you! Check out my other

Thank you! Check out my other works and let me know what you think :D

word_man's picture

sounds kinda sad,life i guess

sounds kinda sad,life i guess


ron parrish