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So i Thought
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder, or so I though,
Intriguing and amazing were compliments, or so I bought.
That’s just the beginning of what I brought to the table,
Cradle, cuddle, spoon, go as far as to put a “Cutest” label.
Had me the first day I met you which almost didn’t happen,
Except you, made the right choices that day, and that still has me laughin.
Stretched the truth a bit while I was talking but you never knew,
Anxious to say and do all the right things and moves, in order to come through.
I pulled a winner and got the digits from you,
No intentions for anything but to chill cuz I thought you were cool.
That didn’t happen.
Shit, probably the best thing happening so far,
Holding you in my arms, touchin palm to palm, givin me that feisty rawr.
I can’t help but stare into your eyes,
Trace the outline of your lips with my finger, all I want is for you to be happy, so I try.
Butterflies fluttering in my stomach, never really done this, call me nervous,
Utterly insane my senses heighten, call me Inspector Gadget, so observant.
Think of any other names, but one things for sure, you can call me smooth,
Have that personality, low key mellow, ya’ll wish you could.
Other than that, I’m just me, and she just her, plain simple,
Elegantly feeding off each other’s vibes, guess you liked the dimple.
Satisfied.
Agonized.
Nothin worse than feelin like something’s lost.
Do work to get it back cuz you say it’s worth it, but at what cost.
Tell yourself it’s gonna work, while others say you is just a sucker,
Rick Rolled your ass like a mother fucker.
Intellectual, sensual ass dude, but she don’t care no more,
Can’t stand two faced bitches, who act different, only at times specific, change once you out the door.
Keep doin what you do tho, everything’s all good,
Shit, this one might be for you tho, or maybe you misunderstood.
have to read this more than
have to read this more than once... it's chock full of thought nuts
Idk if i should take that as
Idk if i should take that as a compliment but... thank you :)
Hmm...
I'm not sure i enjoyed reading it. It was written very well, and at the same time even though art is art i didn't like the cussing. It made a good point. Is your writing style that of someone who holds a grudge? Or is finally over something. You've intrigued me, and made me think. That's good. Usually i know exactly what i feel about a poem. Is the subliminal where you mention feisty rawr? Are you implying you two had sex? Well, you're a great writer.
- Zachariah
Yes i apologize about the
Yes i apologize about the cuss words it just felt needed in the poem. You could say something like finally getting over something. Im not usually a harsh writer like this but my mind was off and it just felt right to write it this way. Thank you for your feedback and compliments. I will most likely be posting a couple more of my poems that are in similar style as to form and flow but not content. Again thank you, means a lot.