GOODBYE

hello, hi, none above are like the word goodbye,
hoping sometime you'll see each other again,
but all that does is keep your hopes held high,
what will you do with your breath,
will you let it slip and fall into a sigh,
hope it dont cause to much pain,
this will be the last time I say goodbye!

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Please tell me what you think.. Im 15 and my friends say I should be a poet... but I want to knoww  what others think.... PLEASE LEAVE A REVEIW

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