Don't A Hole
My skin is black, I don't lack the knack
for soul in a bowl.
I like black hole, brown hole cajole.
My hair is nappie, it makes me all nore happy
My nose is wide that coincide with the great devide
My blood is blue, I wana do you
Make a brew say you
I ask of you,kangaroo,
Pas de deux.
I hate to be a Grammar Nazi,
I hate to be a Grammar Nazi, but in line #4 you put "nore" and I believe you meant "more", also in line #5 you spelt divide like "devide" when it is spelled "dIvide".
Sincerely,
A Grammar Nazi trying to be polite.
P.S.
It's a great read otherwise.
~~We can fade away together one dream at a time.~~