""Emotional Pain""

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A Reason To Live

simple times i don't complain

Lay in my room she waiting outside

the clock has been ringing

i just keep seeing she's waiting outside



To the day i wake up i'm a new man

For all the days i fucked up she still understands

i'm calling out your name

the window is locked and i cut my hand

i want to let you in

but the voices say NO!



you can't be trusted

the pipe your holden in your hand is rusted

breaking the windows smashing my car

as your temper gets stronger the fire last longer

i'm screaming for you waiting outside

the minute i saw you i knew i was going to cry



She waits outside with the baseball bat

she planning to smash my skull

what do you think about that

I'm such a nice guy who did the wrong thing

i'm losing my senses i need to be free

and you wait outside until i open the door



I open the door and let you in

my emotions get stronger each breathe gets harder

your holding the bat i'm ready to die

swing with the bat as hard as i cry

Author's Notes/Comments: 

The scene is a girl beaten on her ex boyfriend, Moral is If i can't have you no one can, Though the boy was waiting to tell her He loves her and try to get back together

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Brittni Surbeck's picture

As I read "Emotional Pain" I felt like I was there. I could picture the scene in my head. It seemed so real too. You have a way with words that makes you an excellent writer.