SUICIDE DREAMS AND LIES THAT CRY FOR HELP

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Teenage Chronicals

Suicide Dreams

And lies that cry for help

Writting by Elliot Bush



Vulger Expressions

Death apon the suicides breath

Parents are the equivelent

Test of future misery

One way to make things right

How about this Nah not to night

Busted razor blades

Man slits his wrist and expects not die

Listen world hear him cry

Tonight he shouts

I don't want to die

Forget missed days

And arguments you can't win

War is the equivelent of sin

Confused of another conflict

It makes this man so sic

Off spitting blood resembling

Every suicide person that died

Not tonight help save his god

It's not his fault one boy suffers

The whole humanity goes down

Dead into the pathectic ground

But meditating is what i found

I'm calming myself down

Hey kid just let me be


Author's Notes/Comments: 

message to those in need..meditate when you feel alone

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