WAS IT LOVE?

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It's All Love

everytime i heard the words you spoke from your throat

those lying words made me wanna choke

you said you loved the things i do

intsead they were lies and they were ment to hurt you



you took out your anger

left me standing in the pouring rain

and i kept screaming out your name



were r u now i wish i knew

were r u now i have no clue

your horrible lies make me want to die



It wasn;t my fault so why am i apologizing to you

It' wasn't my fault so why are denying the truth

I lay here holding the blade to my wrist

I slit my vains yelling your name towards the mist

is that love or is it a lie

i died because i loved you

Author's Notes/Comments: 

i though this was a great poem..because i thought about everyones relationship there is wlways one boy who kills himself because of a girl

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Nancy Mata's picture

this is very good...if a guy ever cared about me enough i wouldnt leave him i would never let go...but guys lie too...and they hurt girls too...just wanted to throw that in...

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TIGHT
AND SWEET

Purple Care Bear's picture

AwWwWwWw!! Much sadness! :( I like this a lot. It's all sad and stuff but written really well! I will check out some more of your poemss. Peace.