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9 LIVES (Cats Tale
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For The Kids Have you ever noticed when your sleeping or just relaxing
Your cat will secretly and supiciously craw on your chest and look straight into your eyes staring directly at you
Do you know what there doing
There stealing your soul
Think about why cats have 9 lives
Because there stealing yours
It's funny to think that your cat is stealing your soulHere is the funny part.. Mommy fluffy is staring at me again meow bad cat
This is a response to "Dr. Hard-On". Yeah, um....you don't know what the hell you're talking about. In some of your critiques, you said Elliot's rhyming is getting better. Well, poems do NOT have to have rhymes in them. There is a variety of different poems, some of which do not consist of having rhymes at all. I happen to think that "9 Lives" is a very interesting poem. It really makes you think. Oh, and learn to spell...in your critique for this poem, you misspelled the word "writing". KEEP UP WITH THE KICK ASS WRITING ELLIOT!!!
the whole poem is a bit strange, the wroting is vague and indifferent and the metaphors used equal the intellegence of a two year old.
try writing someting with more substance...
*dr. harowan wood*