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Girl Friend
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It's All Love memories fade away
the day that darkness came
piled upon the world into pieces
lost gravel of the thesis
there are ten times
better then what I imaging all that I see
is the space of the pasion that she can give to me
I'll put her in my arms and whipser what I shall say
she will ask me out the very next day
We will have a date and it will go good
she will say she dreamed this would happen
in the glowing eyes of my sweet smile
she will open her eyes and wish of the nile on the
Oh to what a sound of the waterfalls running
feel all the wind as your bonding with that speacial girl.
oh yeah the one who means more then the world.
take my hand and guide on through
for the love that you show is all because I found you
girlfriend is one word...
writing constipated and sloppy...
needs work...
I'd consider revising...
*dr wood*
You wrote that 2 days before you met you gf how sweet i read your poems on here and there all good. I also checked out unknown community which i must say your poems are even better i cried laughed teared and smiled your a great poet hope life gets you were you want to go..bye
Baby blue eyes