The hardest thing I ever had to do is turn my heart off from loving you
My nights are lonely and dark
Its not the same anymore
Im trying to be strong
But I feel lost in this world without you
People make it seem like its not a big deal
The memories and pictures will start to disappear
My heart is shattered but I know it will get fixed
Hardest part of breaking up
Is the time you spent to miss.
I'll always love you.
Wow
Wow Redbrick thank you so much for the wonderful feedback. A relationship is fun bu the break up is definitely hard especially when those memories fade.
Your song-like poem captures
Your song-like poem captures heartbreak in such a raw, straightforward way. The struggle to “turn off” love feels so real here. I especially felt the line about the hardest part being “the time you spent to miss,” because it shows how love lingers in memory even when the relationship is gone.
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