“Hardest Thing I Ever Had to Do”

The hardest thing I ever had to do is turn my heart off from loving you

 

My nights are lonely and dark

Its not the same anymore

Im trying to be strong 

But I feel lost in this world without you

 

People make it seem like its not a big deal

 

The memories and pictures will start to disappear 

 

My heart is shattered but I know it will get fixed

Hardest part of breaking up

Is the time you spent to miss.

 

I'll always love you.

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Wow

Wow Redbrick thank you so much for the wonderful feedback. A relationship is fun bu the break up is definitely hard especially when those memories fade. 

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Your song-like poem captures

Your song-like poem captures heartbreak in such a raw, straightforward way.  The struggle to “turn off” love feels so real here. I especially felt the line about the hardest part being “the time you spent to miss,” because it shows how love lingers in memory even when the relationship is gone.Smile


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