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Un- Tie my heart.
My mind and heart are twisting into one big knot.
Somebodys pulling on it, I cant loosen it, or un-tie it.
Or get it out of their grasp.
Why are they pulling on me, and tugging so hard?
Cant they see , the two arent ment to combine?
Cant they relise what its doing to me
Will it fix and hold me, or will it break and drop me
Help me live, or become the death of me
Whats going to happen to my thoughts and feelings
Will they remain, or leave
Will they change or stay the same
Will they make me smile tomarrow or instead cause me pain today
Will it comfort me, or drive me insane
can things ever go back to the way they used to be,
will they be like the times before,
or will they end up being, what we both fear?
Will they be the same, or will they change in all the bad ways
Will we be ok? will we survive this, if it falls, and crashes to the ground?
Will we be able to pick up the pieces and put them back in place
Will we be able to get up and walk away, and go on like we always have?
OR
will we get stuck on our knees with tears in our eyes,
begging God to let us stay, to let us go back in time,
to the place we want to be, with you standing beside me holding on tightly.
Promising to never leave again, looking into my eyes, and saying I love you , forever.
Will we give up and stay on the ground , in the puddle of tears
that we fell so swiftly from our eyes, like rain drops from the sky?
Will we let our broken hearts mend or will we just live with the bullet,
woulds inside us?
The metal cold, and sharp inside us, and makes us scream out in agony,
with each breath our lungs take?
Will we be able to shake, the pain and sadness out of us, if we fell again?
Will we survive this?
If not then, please,please,please, un-tie the knot your making,
un-tie the knot of my mind, and heart, my thoughts and feelings.
Let them be two differant things, once more.
***PART ONE. (TO keep this short, and easyer to read, im putting the rest of this into another poem look for Part two.)************
Wow hon! That's really
Wow hon! That's really good!
Some grammar points: When you wrote: "Will they make me smile tomarrow or instead cause me pain today" You spelled tomorrow wrong, you spelled it as tomarrow.
Sorry! I couldn't help myself!!
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