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Night grows near
Thoughts unclear
Another day brought to conclusion
without any restitution

mind racing; body pacing
unable to grind to a halt

From seconds to minutes
and minutes to hours
Seeking the guidance from higher powers

Confusion in everything seems to appear
Delusions and hysteria seem to grow near

Drift now and sail; fly high and be free
Seeking warm feelings; this is my plea

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Any comments, good or bad, are welcome. Please leave a comment and let me know if you liked it, how it made you feel or what you didn't like about it. Thanks for taking the time to read my work. :)

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©28 June 2011 - 6:17am — drkpuzzle
16 November 2011 - 6:24am — dancergirlrox
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:)

I enjoyed it, too. It's unbelievably true- and plus it rhymes, which I always love. :) My poems do too. Not so many people on here write rhyming poems that I've seen, which I don't really understand because I always end up rhyming accidentally when I try to write one that doesn't. Haha.

Good work! :)

1 July 2011 - 5:12am — running_with_rabbits
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I really enjoyed that

I really enjoyed that poem
thanks for the share

the beging really impacted me, I have felt this way many times in my life

Much Love

Ashley

3 July 2011 - 4:24am — drkpuzzle
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I'm glad you enjoyed that.

I'm glad you enjoyed that. Thank you for the kind words. :)

The only real failure in life is not to be true to the best one knows.--Buddha