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i love you third grade style

I love you once

I love you twice

I love you more than chicken soup with rice.



I love you three

I love you four

I love you lying on the floor.



I love you five

I love you six

I love you doing silly tricks.



I love you seven

I love you eight

I love you leaning on a gate.



I love you nine

I love you ten

I love you so much I'll start over again!



OK, so maybe I've regressed a little to third grade,

but your love is driving me mad.

Hope I can drive you mad too.





Lori Ann Reed

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last updated 11 October 2010 - 7:56am
©22 January 2004 - 3:22am — passionateprincess1
14 February 2004 - 3:42am — chris
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Hi again. Great poem. I loved it. I really did. I really loved the simplicity of it. It was cool, it really was. You are talented in that you can write in the style of a third grader. A really great poem, I will be coming back to read it.
Thanks for sharing it with us, and keep driving down that great poetic highway.

3 February 2004 - 1:12am — Joeyn (not verified)
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I like your poems... especially this one. Can i use it to write a love letter for my guy?