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Her lips forbiden pour honey so sweet, and her voice spoken flows of the smoothest silks. But in the end she is bitter and the forbiden one has been tanted. the one you sacrificed your self and your life for is now gone. all that remanes is a cold outter shell and your the one to blame. you tasted forbiden fruit and now will pay with the loss of the one FORBIDEN.

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©28 October 2004 - 12:35pm — doyle51209
9 January 2008 - 7:06pm — ValentineBuchannan
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I dont think I have ever said this but i love the way this poem flows... its kewl

More Human than Humans

6 April 2005 - 9:30pm — poetvg
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excellent piece

28 October 2004 - 7:28pm — Jill (not verified)
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Holy shit Eddie... thats kickin awesome! .. PAUL YOU IDIOT! But yeah Eddie do keep up hte good work.. an dsorry for the subject change.. I'll call to yell at Paul later...

28 October 2004 - 6:58pm — Bonez (not verified)
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dude thats aswome. Did something happen that I don't know about? Guess what man...I got my 1st suspension. i called the pricipal a bitch so the vice gave me a suspension. funny thing is my parents wern't so mad. Well keep it up bro.

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