Fading Softly

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Suicide

You’ve lost it all, you’ve lost your hope

Nothing can save you, now your through.



Softly now, your whole world starts to shake,

An endless life, a life you’ll take



The Blade calls out to you, it looks so sweet

Hold it tightly, and its edge you will meet.



No time to spare, save no despair

You won’t go on, life isn’t fair.



The blade strikes pain, and as you bleed

The pain wasn’t as much as the life you lead

And as the floor turns to red,

Your soul slowly joins the dead.



Slowly fading, blade is aiding

Fading to black, you’ll never come back

Slowly going, passing now

Fading on, and almost gone.



It’s like a hole, digging deeply

Blackened now, ever sweetly

The hole is bigger, you can’t climb out

As hard you try, you can’t go back now.

All of the sudden, YOU ARE the hole

Fade to black, no going back



You changed your mind, you start to weep

But its too late, you cut too deep

And now your slowly fading on,

Now your soul is almost gone.

One last chance, is all you need

It's far too late, STILL you bleed

You wish you could take it back, somehow

But tears won't give your life back now.



Slowly fading, blade is aiding

Fading to black, you’ll never come back

Slowly going, passing now

Fading on, and almost gone.



Fade to black, your world is dieing

Now your family members crying

All around your lonely grave

Your spirit gone, they couldn’t save.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I'll let this one speak for itself.

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Amanda McDaniel's picture

I thought that it was very good! and I just wanted to know if you had thought about suicide...you dont have to answer if you dont feel comfertable..I think that you will really enjoy my poem entiled Goodbye you should read it...-Simply Amanda-