You’ve lost it all, you’ve lost your hope
Nothing can save you, now your through.
Softly now, your whole world starts to shake,
An endless life, a life you’ll take
The Blade calls out to you, it looks so sweet
Hold it tightly, and its edge you will meet.
No time to spare, save no despair
You won’t go on, life isn’t fair.
The blade strikes pain, and as you bleed
The pain wasn’t as much as the life you lead
And as the floor turns to red,
Your soul slowly joins the dead.
Slowly fading, blade is aiding
Fading to black, you’ll never come back
Slowly going, passing now
Fading on, and almost gone.
It’s like a hole, digging deeply
Blackened now, ever sweetly
The hole is bigger, you can’t climb out
As hard you try, you can’t go back now.
All of the sudden, YOU ARE the hole
Fade to black, no going back
You changed your mind, you start to weep
But its too late, you cut too deep
And now your slowly fading on,
Now your soul is almost gone.
One last chance, is all you need
It's far too late, STILL you bleed
You wish you could take it back, somehow
But tears won't give your life back now.
Slowly fading, blade is aiding
Fading to black, you’ll never come back
Slowly going, passing now
Fading on, and almost gone.
Fade to black, your world is dieing
Now your family members crying
All around your lonely grave
Your spirit gone, they couldn’t save.
I thought that it was very good! and I just wanted to know if you had thought about suicide...you dont have to answer if you dont feel comfertable..I think that you will really enjoy my poem entiled Goodbye you should read it...-Simply Amanda-