My rating for this poem: Eh... *
(*-pure crap, **-Not so Great, ***-Farely decent, ****- Excellent, *****- Outstanding)
I think we're lost in a world of hate,
Baby, we gotta get out of this place.
I see it written on your face,
I long to hold you all the time.
I long to see you smile,
but I can't hold you for a while?
Your voice is sweeter than the songbird sings.
Baby your beauty makes the churchbells ring.
Your lovely enough to give angels wings.
And all of those things are beautiful things...
But none as beautiful as you.
To the corner run and hide
but baby, your only safe for a while.
Walk to the center of the room.
And you see me standing there.
We gotta leave, but I don't know where.
I long to see you smile,
but I can't hold you for a while?
Your voice is sweeter than the songbird sings.
Baby your beauty makes the churchbells ring.
Your lovely enough to give angels wings.
And all of those things are beautiful things...
But none as beautiful as you.
I really like this poem, n tha rest of ur poems r really good too.
It's a bit cliched for my liking, but hey, each to their own, it's still sweet. I wish someone'd write something like that for me!
~Kate~
hey! havent had too much of a chance to get on much lately.. but thought i'd come read some of your poems now that i'm on.. i really like this one, it is very sweet.
alli