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its a love story send a letter, straight to my heart
seal it with a piece of art
lock all those pieces, into place
say a prayer, of love and grace
dont forget, the words you said
keep them safe, inside your head
remember them, for when i'm blue
recite them to me, when were through
you said those words, you did, not me
you spoke outloud, fable words possibly
white lies of love, and caring more
love said to much, became such a bore
your words spoke clear, bright as day
then seconds past, they float away
suddenly gone, no words are said
we stop talking, arguing instead
you sent me off, like a wild horse
walked away,like whatever, no fear, no remorse
like poof just be gone, goodbye fairy tale
this is the end, relationship = fail!
considering peace, i guess its ok
i'm kind of quite, dont have much to say
like frost bit from winter, i'm numb and dont care
but memories unburned, are still lingering here
a voice i still hear, those words are still said
the shirt is right there, seen right before bed
dream randomly, when i think i dont care
i guess my heart is still waiting, with nobody there
i dont think much, i've turned things around
i think i've stopped floating, i've found solid ground
once again, baby emmie, is my whole world
thank god i've stopped spinning, things are no longer swirled
broken bridge is whatever, i've found stepping stones
i've made my way over the river of unknowns
the path that once lead, washed away and now gone
dont be afraid, cause i'm still moving on
so what i have scars, its a story to tell
the stories aren't as good, with out some of hell
heaven the same, you have got to have good
so this poem ends, it ends now, understood?
This is a great piece of
This is a great piece of work,
There's so much in every line
I agree with most of it fantastic read! Thanks!
I also like that stanza too ;)
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."
:)
I love this stanza:
"dont forget, the words you said
keep them safe, inside your head
remember them, for when i'm blue
recite them to me, when we're through"
not only does it flow beautifully but itisalso a feeling almost anyone can relate too :)
also I LOVE THESE LINES:
"like frost bit from winter, i'm numb and dont care
but memories unburned, are still lingering here"
only thing I suggest it change here to there, there rhymes better witrh care.
:( the first heart break is hard, I wish I could say they get better but they really don't, although I think in time we all learn better ways to deal with heart break and it seemsto hurt less for shorter periods of time.
HUGS
Much Love
Ashley
thank you and i will def. do
thank you and i will def. do that when i get the time :)
amber nicole
This is simply amazing. Im in
This is simply amazing. Im in love with everything about this. Very well written. Was more than a pleasure to have read this.
The only problem with the story carved on your chest, is its hard to read when your missing your ribs..
thank you :)
thank you :)
amber nicole