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Word Play (with Jeremy) don't forget you have to die
every day we live to sacrifice
estranged I stand from the flesh
A court ordered divorce from the just judge
leaving me cookie sheet matted,
But still i stand elated
for when this body expires
I'll retire to streets that gold plated
decrypting my essence,
to find a true presence
until this soul vainly walks no more,
obtaining treasures unknown
dwelling in satan’s chambers,
i praise the only worthy Father
who dwelled in a mortal body
his life he gave and offered up
graciously without regret,
I'll forever bow my head toward the dirt
persecuted but not forsaken,
cast down but not destroyed
tormented but not broken,
convicted by unworthy priest
but not by the only worthy father
temptations attempt to seduce me
and burdens are weighing heavy on me
as i focus on calculating my losts,
while deciding to overlook my costs
I thought I was high
but it was only my pride
it only makes sense I fell low
By: Jeremy Baker & David Johnson
I really enjoy this poem;
I really enjoy this poem; there is an infinity of creativity in two minds. This poem is not only well written, but it also praises our Father. A very good write, and definitely worthy of mention. Keep it up guys. Your Friend, Seraphim
Post Tenebras Spero Lucem
some of us do the same thing!
This is a fantastic example! Congrats to both! Well done I really think it has meat on bones with interesting skin cheers SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."