A Tale Of Love..

Girl you drive me crazy, Like you under the influence.

I love the way it feel its like a drug, so im abusing.

You try to take away my high.. and it'll end in bruising.

Ima fiend for your love i admit it, No accusing.

There ain't no need to point fingers, baby I'll take all the blame.

I hate to see you cry, I wish that I could take your pain.

Yell, scream, and curse but my feeling will remain.

I'll hold you threw whatever, even if its raining flames.

If i die without protecting you, my whole life was in vain.

That's why there's smile on my face, as were engulfed in flames.

When the flames finally stop only ruins will remain.

A breeze blows threw this graveyard, ashes flying threw the plains.

So pieces of our love are sprayed on the terrain.

Clouds begin to form and it begins to rain.

The next day it's a miracle to hard to explain.

In the ground there are tree's begging to sprout.

Our Love is what brought this phenomenon about.

Our ashes spread wide and fertilized the land.

So with the death of True Love is how New Love Begins... - Devonte Mack

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I Like it, but What do you think? comment please :)

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twisted_soul's picture

i think its beautiful, you

i think its beautiful, you are devoted to this relationship. is it the girl in the pic? you are lucky, but she is luckier. she should be the same way twards you.

demigodess's picture

its sweet :)

im glad you like it, its something to be proud of :) its a little choppy but all in all its very good work :)


~Grass is green~ <^>

Dmack8104's picture

I Know its My first story

I Know its My first story poem ill work on it but thank You for taking the time to read it :)


An ignorant mind neglects common sense, seeking what doesn't exists, unaware of the coming abyss, and cannot see the hate behind a loving kiss. - Devonte Mack

’ ̿’̵͇̿̿з=(ˆ◡ˆ)=ε/̵͇̿̿/’̿’̿ ̿ Don't make me shoot you with my love, Its deadly..

demigodess's picture

:)

if its any indication of whats to come, im excited :p


~Grass is green~ <^>

Dmack8104's picture

I hope i don't disappoint :/

I hope i don't disappoint :/ Lol


An ignorant mind neglects common sense, seeking what doesn't exists, unaware of the coming abyss, and cannot see the hate behind a loving kiss. - Devonte Mack

’ ̿’̵͇̿̿з=(ˆ◡ˆ)=ε/̵͇̿̿/’̿’̿ ̿ Don't make me shoot you with my love, Its deadly..