so what was it.
what was so wrong
you couldnt hold on
you said it wasnt me
you think i can believe
that for your answer
i may have never been the best
i hope i was better than the rest
its strange not having you around
i miss the things we used to do
i remeber all the good times and the bad
it all makes me sad.
just to know we’re through
it killing me beacause i dont know what to do
try and move on to better things
i suppose i could try but what would that bring
happieness i hope.
i havent had a chance to smile
in a long while
i havent had much to be glad about
its not your fault
i dont blame you anymore
i blame myself
for my lack of motivation
but what can i do
it seems that i loose and loose
god if your out there give me a sighn
im dying here waitning for somthing to happen.
anything at all
show me a way out of this rut that i am in
i need some salvation from this pain and
hoplessness that i feel.
my life makes less and less
sence as the days pass on
what is my probablem
i am a child of great for and even worse misery
i’ve dwelled in sorrow all of my life
when can i have my piece of happness
This is a good poem, I feel kinda the same way you do all the time, even though I've never had a girl. But I too wonder when I will get my piece of happiness. Don't worry though I am sure you'll find a girl just for ya.
best wishes
Bruce
Erny, Erny, Erny. Am I sensing a theme here? LOL I like this one even better than "bitch". It was familiar. Kinda sad but not in a bad way. So far out of the two I read this one is my favorite. Maybe I should write a reply to it. Hmmm...... maybe like Boys=Headache? Whatcha think? Ok off to read more of your work~ Toodles. Oh yeah is that Suicidal Tendencies on your shirt? Right on!!!