You are such a fake
I should have pierced you miles away
Rather I let you in
To my small protected world
I really have no space
For I am too tired
Of getting vulnerable
And being broken
Nevertheless, I opened the gates
Slowly rolled out the carpet
And you slid in majestically
I let you in
To my innermost thoughts and dreams
To bare myself
To feel naked
Yet protected
I fell more than I thought I would
I felt this was right
My thinking was marred
But I was happy
Slowly and painstakingly
You shied away, going farther and farther
I tried to reach out
But I know it is futile
So I loosened my grip
I did not even have to set you free
You pushed me back further before running away from me.
Now, I see it clearer
That you were special enough
For you to be my only one
While I was enough to be
Among your many others
Very good poem!
I liked the ending and the way you built the story up! Nice work! SS
Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS
"Well, it's love, but not as we know it."