Elusive Dream



He writes of things that don’t often matter

in his mind is a world that can’t get much sadder

often misunderstood, seldom seen

known he should, happiness was an elusive dream



Minutes turn to hours, months turn to years

present the past sours, validating his fears

loneliness looms, awaits him in minds darkened rooms

Premature gray, has had it’s say, from many troubled moons



He covets his bright spots, keeps them safe and sound

tucked away, he cherishes them each day

rejoices each reflective one, like a treasure he suddenly found



Absurdity of perception, others harbored notions ill conceived

finds him in state of perplextion, at what they truly believe



Still, he utters no debate, let’s them think and believe what they will

he harbors no anger, they are in no danger, of knowing what he truly feels



For silence has become his virtue, and strong stone, his wall is high

love he will continue, if only shared in poem venue,

or a whisper, from his lips, toward the heavenly sky



Copyright © 2001 Dennis Hicks

12/27/01








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Ruth Lovejoy's picture

I really like this because though the person in question in the poem, at least according to my own interpretation has ideas and thoughts though not vocalized, he or she is passive in evoking any turmoil by voicing that opion and rather reflect on the good and beautiful which can be demonstrated in written poetry. I too, many times keep things to myself though at points in the written word will express them even if negative because I feel it needs to be said.This piece struck a nerve with me and I really like it. Keep up the good work!

Angela Albee's picture

very intriguing....