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DAYDREAM
I DAYDREAM THROUGH THE NIGHT,
THINKING BOUT YOU ,
WHAT A SWEET PERSON,
WHAT A HANDSOM PERSON,
THIS BEAUTIFUL DREAM,
I WISH WOULD LAST,
THEN I AWAKE ,
AND THERE YOU ARE,
STARING AT ME,
THEN I SMILE,
AND HOPE BY SOME CHANCE,
THAT YOU DREAM AND THINK OF ME TO!,
BUT I KNOW THAT THIS DREAM WILL LAST,
CAUSE SOME HOW,
SOME WAY,
YOU'LL FEEL FOR ME,
LIKE I FEEL FOR YOU.
Very good! This is a great
Very good! This is a great poem, and from one so young! But also, since I am an older person, I'd advise you to wait a couple years before looking for prince charming. Just a piece of friendly advice from someone who went looking too soon.... Otherwise, I really like this poem! Keep writing
Your Friend,
~Seraphim~
Post Tenebras Spero Lucem
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