thoughts

Theres a place that i found
as far as i can see
this place lies within
the depths of my dreams

we can leave this world
leave it all behind
we can steal this car
if your folks dont mind
we can live forever
if you've got the time

just stay with me
even if i bleed
never let me go
and never forget me

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Great start to a great poem! ;) I'd love to hear more! Cheers SS


Don't let any one shake your dream stars from your eyes, lest your soul Come away with them! -SS    

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