Where do you turn to
When you cannot trust yourself?
Stuck in the gray
No impulsive energy
To brace upon a wavering truth
When your heart's in the right place
But it turns out that place may be your feet
How do you make ends meet?
Based on my meandering experience
The only file in this tower
That contends with this error
Is devout immersion in each junction
and comparison of which feels most genuine and prosperous
Do not fear your imperfections
Succumb willingly and of knowledgeable mind to them
Allow the journey to dictate the road and do not inverse
Do not convert
Adjust to yourself instead
Grow
Now I've only read
Now I've only read a few of your poems do far and I like bits and bits of many of them, but out of the ones I've read this is my favorit. Great job!
You can only be as beautiful as you tell yourself you are, but you can't let beauty get to your head.
thank you keep writin! :)
thank you keep writin! :)
Thank you very much Dove,
Thank you very much Dove, I'll have to give your work a look :) much appreciated
boy have i been there.. very
boy have i been there.. very true, i loved it... i look forward to reading more :)... i especially like the end where you give some very usefull advice.
lee
thank you very much Lee :)
thank you very much Lee :) I'll have to do the same and give your work some reading as well
Perhaps you are right on the
Perhaps you are right on the ending. Very nice writing though, I can tell there's heartfelt put into it.
thank you very much for you
thank you very much for you kind words, Mardigan - i'll have to take a look at your work in the near future :)