Quick Slip of the Wrist

You're just in time to see me slip.  Slowly slip away as i slit my wrist.  Just one time and it'll be quick.  Just to make it fun let's give it a twist.  Twist it til the blood starts falling down.  Pool of blood slowly grows on the ground.  Starting off small but now it is large.  Larger then life could've been in a while.  Limbs are getting heavy and hard to raise.  Euphoria kicks in as my life slips away.  i can feel my heart as it's starting to stop.  i try to look in the mirror but i just drop.  Finally i can get some well deserved rest.  Rest that will last forever i guess.  i'm coming in and drifting back out.  It's too late now but i'm filling with doubt.  i can only gurgle as i'm trying to shout.  But i'm still glad i've chosen this route.  To much shit happening in one place.  i couldn't keep up with the world's fast pace.  My last thought is You and how i was amazed.  i accept the end now with a smile on my face.

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Lindsey Fleetwood's picture

so yes, this is a very depressing poem. but i like it. it is well written and, it's like i was right there dying with you.

xoxo
lindsey

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