Audrey's Poem

My soul is as black as the night

And as stealthy as a cat

Creeping along all paths

That will hopefully lead me somewhere

 

 

My heart is like a drum

Where it is strong and forceful

But can be quiet and meaningful

And keeps the tempo to drive me to goals

 

 

My brain is a jungle

With twists and turns

And unpredictability as

To what could come out at you next

 

 

My words dance off the

Top of my tongue

I speak as if my words

Are glass and will break

If spoken wrong.

 

My personality is a sunset

With different shades of color

And can come off strong

But will fade into something beautiful

And bright

 

I as a whole am a panther

I strike when it’s strategic

All though dangerous

Appear as elegant

All though complicated

I am playful

I come when I need to

And I leave when I feel

Work for what I get

Get what I deserve

But still a cat all the same

Just bigger.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Thanks for reading, I love criticism!

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allets's picture

A Wondrous Composition

Love your line "...words are glass and will break if spoken wrong..." Yeah, like that! Applause and encore. ~slc~
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KindredSpirit's picture

I like it

But I'm worried about your soul

 Darkness creeps

When nothing else is in it