On A Try At Poetry

Heartbreaks may nearly be described perhaps with a sea of tears,

A thousand cries won't express the pain of how someone doesn't care,

How does a heart's breaking resound so powerfully without a sound?

What words illustrate or paint the face of the feeling I have now?

And is this expression in itself considered poetry?

To hell with beauty and moving lines, I want to say what I feel.

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I had all these painful emotions held-up inside and they wouldn't come out right, but I wanted to express myself. I guess I got fed up and just wrote.

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