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How Long?

 

Should I come right out?

Should I scream and shout?

Will you love me if I die?

Will you love me when I fly?

Should I jump and froget?

Should I have a regret?

Will you hate my life?

Will you hate my Knife?

Should I blame myself?

Should I blame anyone else?

Will you remember me when I am gone?

And if so, for how long?

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One poem after a long night.

 

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last updated 24 June 2014 - 4:34pm
©12 February 2014 - 8:53pm — DarkLight
7 March 2014 - 3:46pm — justanotherscreename
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Should, will, should, will,

Should, will, should, will, should will; always questions we ask, but never recieve and answer. We all know the feeling.

3 March 2014 - 5:48pm — a.griffiths57
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    Oh! to be remembered at

 

 

Oh! to be remembered at all. In this poem you have many questions of your love; i hope you and your love find some answers together. This poem lists some acts to accomplish, but realy are the expression of your emotions for you loved one. I thought the rhyming in this poem was accomplished a good read this poem.

 

 

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4 March 2014 - 10:39pm — DarkLight
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Thank you!

Thank you very much!