Ego

Love, or self

you have to choice is it I - or is i

Love is what we ''Give''

Love is what we ''Get''

Our intuitions off

We love each other still

''Ego'' or else, ''we go''?

Im doing this all for you

Dare say our love, and mister

I'll have to go away with you

Strings around my neck choke me

When I say the words ''I love you''

Never again will I dare to say those cursed words...

Author's Notes/Comments: 

Uhm well yah my frist poem please be turthful ^^

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Thanks for the feedback ^.^

Thanks for the feedback ^.^

allets's picture

Great First Poem

Welcome to PP. Read my creative writing (CW) poetry workshops 101-107 under "Allets": - It's  a great start! ~~Lady A~~


 

 

darkcornypoet's picture

Really?

Awww, thanks my english teacher told me to come to this website to get out some of my poetic feelings out. But Im surprized that someone thought It was good! Thanks again :D

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Yes

Thank the heavens for your teacher