How suicide feels

this is how it feels

you cant breath

you cant speak

you cant controll your body

The hurt you feel is so deep

you shake

you sweat

you think

the hurt is a constant beep

your life is in your hands

this is how it feels

When you want to be DEAD!

Author's Notes/Comments: 

THIS IS WHAT I THINK IT FEELS LIKE....KEY WORD I ...YOU DONT THINK SO ALWELL FUCK OFF

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Theresa H's picture

HEY THIS IS A GOOD POEM. I GUESS NOW THAT I READ THIS I CAN UNDERSTAND PPL LIKE THIS. I LOOK AT MY SISTER AND I DONT UNDERTSNAD HER. I GUESS ITS JUST ANOTHER THING TO NOT THINK ABOUT. WELL COME CHECK OUT SOME OF MY POEMS. I HAE EM BUT YOU MAY NOT. IM ABBYS SISTER. IM NOT LIKE HER BUT AT TIME I WANNA BE. OK WELL IM OFF COME CHECK EM OUT. OK BYE

Sammey Cobain's picture

this is great.. i know how you feel...
email me sometime