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Whole. Broken. Healed.
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love and stuff You made me laugh when I felt like crying,
You made me smile when I felt so mad,
You made me whole when I felt broken,
No wonder it was my heart you had.
But then all within a couple days,
Everything fell apart.
And bit by bit and truth by truth,
You shattered my whole heart.
Instead of laughing, I felt like crying.
Instead of smiling, I felt so mad
Instead of whole, I felt broken,
No wonder my heart you no longer have.
Time went by and slowly healed,
Then I had an epiphany,
Without the tears inside my eyes,
I could finally see.
Now I realize crying was so pointless.
And so was being mad.
I didn't need to dwell on brokeness.
I don't need to feel bad.
Now he makes me laugh when I feel like crying,
He makes me smile when I feel so mad,
He makes me whole when I feel broken,
No wonder it's my heart he has.
Someday you might find you miss me,
And think I'll run back to you once more.
But I won't fall, again,
For your games, my friend.
Never will I fall like twice before.
Thank you all for your
Thank you all for your comments :) i like hearing both what u think and ur reactions to my writings :)
-Bryson T. Staley
I liked it is a very nice
I liked it is a very nice poem i like how you wrote everything that you were feeling its really good.thats how i write my poems. :)
i just wish i could have realized before having fallen so deep. :(
I liked the read. You have
I liked the read. You have some deep emotion set into this writing, and your good writing shows it. Also like that it tells how what many people have and maybe going through. Having a person who has your heart in their hands, to have it crumble to pieces, and yet to still feel something for them in the end, and go back one more time even after what happened. Good job on the poem, read some of your others and they were real good as well. Keep up the good work.