Flash Fiction Story

“The best day of his life”

 

David, a mexican native that has lived in La Jolla, California since he was 10 years old, was a really wealthy guy living a lonely life, no wife and no kids. Every day, David went down to the beach surfing, he really loved that sport and was really good at it. David got everything in his life, money, happiness, a really nice hobby, but really was missing one thing, a girl. It was a pretty sunny saturday evening, David was coming off the ocean when he saw a beatiful girl tanning under a pink umbrella. He was really really putting his eyes on her, like he had never seen a girl before. So that was it, David had to take advantage of the opportunity he ever wanted.  The girl was asleep, so he sat there in a beach chair waiting on her to wake up. After 20 minutes, David really desperate, poke her in the back of his bikini. She woke up, astonished by how handsome David was.

 

“Whats your name? “Asked the girl.

“My name is David, i was just trying to see your face, and its beatiful as i expected. Whats your name” Asked David.

“Oh, thats so sweet, thank you. My name is Monica. Nice to meet you.  So you like surfing huh?

“Yeah, pretty much, is what i do in this sunny days you know, basically being doing this for my entire life.”

“Thats nice, said Monica, i really like surfing too.”

 

As soon as David heard that from Monica, he was in complete shock, he had never ever met someone that likes surfing at all.

When that happened, David was amazed for 5 complete seconds, in complete shock. David grabbed his board and ran straight to the  ocean in a state of complete happiness. He swim to reach a 15 meter wave that was approaching. The wave was coming, Monica couldnt do anything but run after him and yelled “STOP DAVID, what are you doing wait for me!!”. David never heard Monica at all. David was prepared for the biggest wave he hade ver seen and by the time he stood up to start surfing, he fell, and never ever got out of the ocean. Monica waited for him to come out but never did.

 

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