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I listened to the speech the commanding
officer made ,an marveled at the fact
he could say it with conviction
an a straight face
though at times some blood is spilt
to correct some intolerable wrong,
our souls will become more pure,
as we aim toward a higher good.
what a crock of shit
our souls will become more pure ?
I have killed in the name of country
but never a god
indifferent and defiant committed to
only those I love
when need commands rules are
made to be bent,
sometimes loyalty is betrayed
the truth trampled into the ground
Yet I've never grovelled for the things
I have done
but I have no illusions on having
a pure soul

~ D Donner ~

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©25 March 2012 - 7:58am — Daniel-59
12 September 2015 - 2:35pm — allets
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Calling It Right

you have a knack for truth - unraveling the crap-spiel - a nice posture for poetry. Hope all is well ~allets~

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26 March 2012 - 3:18pm — running_with_rabbits
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:) I think only children have

:) I think only children have pure souls :)
good write

Much Love

Ashley

28 March 2012 - 4:02am — Daniel-59
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only children have pure souls

I 110% agree with You !

Every story-teller bends the myth to his own purpose. that's why a Hero has a thousand faces

28 March 2012 - 9:04am — running_with_rabbits
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great minds think alike ;) or

great minds think alike ;) or at the very least similar minds do :)

Much Love

Ashley