The Bitch (Modified by AquarianMale)

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This bitch I can't stand stood in front of my house like we were best friends;

With a fake smile, fake laugh, fake boobs, and fake personality;

She's like a grimy, dirty coin, and not worth my flipping off;

 Just two-faced, with no monetary value, and certainly not worth my time;

 She's too busy with a dick in her mouth to stand up for the whore she is.

 

 I guess that's just how all ya'll fake sluts act nowadays;

Too busy blowing to start showing your fear of what could really happen;

If she thinks I'm vulnerable against her, she has another challenge to face;

This bitch I can't stand stood in front of my house waiting to get shot down;

With the overwhelming words putting her down, her guards are down;

Now, this bitch I can't stand layed on the ground, praying I'd go away.

 
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This poem is the modified version of This Bitch written by me, but modified by AquarianMale.

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"With the overwhelming words

"With the overwhelming words putting down her guards down" ... Hey daddysbrat27, does this line say what you intended it to say? Slow down, you're got some good, fiery emotions going for you. Work it!

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Yeah kinda, it's supposed to

Yeah kinda, it's supposed to say "With the overwhelming words putting her down, her guards are down"


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