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Heavenly Storm
Did you ever really stop and wonder
what makes the sound that we call thunder.
Maybe it's God, clapping his hands
or maybe his angels, doing a dance.
What causes rain, do we really know.
I think God's watering his plants so they'll grow
or maybe his angels, like you and like me
like playing in the sprinklers, to have fun and be free.
When you see lightning, flashing so bright
It's probably God, testing his lights
Or maybe his angels, just to have fun
turn on their flashlights, one by one.
So the next time a storm comes your way
just remember what i had to say.
God and his angels like to have fun,
even on days when there is no sun.
Goon poem
Witty and clever, and the rhymes simply flow. Well done!
Thank you
Thank you very much for the positive feedback. It was the first poem I ever wrote. :-)
Wow!
If that's your first, you have a magic touch! Keep writing! Your sense of rhyme and rhythm is wonderful!
Contentment.
You have a very unique cleverness.
Your poem brought me much merriment.
I greatly enjoyed.
=^.^=
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
Thank you
Thank you very much! Always nice to know someone enjoys the poetry you write. I don't have a lot of time to write, have so many other things to keep up with. I do enjoy it when I have the time!
Thanks again for the positive feedback!! :-)