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Wring the dry nights on heavy sighs,

String the solo days in echo,

For no-one knows,

Silently she cries,

Cursing a longing,

In two hanging arms,

Of loneliness.



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Silently she cries

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©27 July 2017 - 8:39am — Coffeepot
2 April 2018 - 11:45am — allets
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String The Day, Wring The Nights

Imagery of this calibre is easy to internalize and sip from occasionally. Portrait and instruction tool, well sculpted word groupings, syntax that is extraordinarily selected for maximal emotional impact. Enjoyed and learned. Refreshingly arranged verse here - slc

 

 

3 April 2018 - 8:11am — Coffeepot
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Thanks for the lovely comment

Thanks for the lovely comment glad to hear you enjoyed it