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It Rains Inside
The day you left I could not stop the rain
I could not make it
Not even fake it
But now it feels so right
Its alright
I still feel the sour
I still see the towers in your eyes
I hide
I hide behind the clouds
I hide behind the smile
Like a hedgehog in a fog
I'm not supposed to say it now, but...
I'm lost
this is an interesting
this is an interesting piece!! i would like to see more!!!!!! you have a different flow to your words, i dont see that often. keep up the good work. dont try so hard...let it come to you. if you have to leave it unfinished for a few days do so and the words will just come to you trust me i do it alllllll the time :)
Its the first piece I have
Its the first piece I have ever written, it came very easy and took just as much time as typing it down. As I rarely do read anything poetical, had no idea if its anything more than a crap or not. But I'm surprised and happy to hear what you said, so THANK YOU!