If only it would do something
other than this rain...
Perhaps.....a fluttery burst
of lacy snowflakes
falling in
~~heavenly~~
spirals ,floating
dreamily in
slow motion
to a white diamond earth,
or the pinging of hail
upon a
red wood deck
surrounded by
oak and pines.
Or even if it were
a cauldron of fog
rising up from
the valley floor
like some eerie
witches brew
on Halloween.
Anything but this
pounding ,drumming
incessant thrumming
drip, drip drone...
a torrential downpour
from dark angry clouds
with a cold embrace
obscuring
my lovely
view of the sea
This dreary gray rain
Just keeps on
reminding me
far,too much
of you and I.
cold embrace , gray are the words
It's
amazing how just the prompt of two or three words can develop into an idea.
Words
Set writers on fire.
You would know that:)
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
OooOOOoo
That ending!!
I was not expecting that one.
Very creative write CKK!
"We are, Each of us angels with only one wing, and we can only fly by embracing one another." -Luciano De Crescenzo
thanks
Ash, bickering isn't my style,but it's common so I wrote this:)
i appreciate your time in reading and commenting!
cheers!
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words
I Can See This Poem
Great visual write. Exceptional addition to 365 anthology. ~A~
Allets
thanks much!
Poetry is passion,imagination & soul mixing together....
Words