Away

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Anger

Biting

And sucking

And stabbing

And groping

And feeling

And raping

I'm trying

I'm coping

I can't get away

It's forcing me to stay

So trapped here I lay

I can't get away

I'm trying

I'm coping

Still dreaming

Still hoping

I'm crying

I'm moping

I'm fighting

I'm choking

I will get away

From this place one day

I'll make my stand now

I will get away

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Ohh, thats so awesome, oh good god, that was real smooth, real freakin cool... Yeah i can definately relate, yeah, thanks, i have posted many poems trying to describe how i feel but i gave up and wrote of other feelings, i thought it was unable to be described perfectly without using Bert McCrakens own words, thanks you just clarifyd that lost feeling, you are awesome....

Doesnt it feel nice to get a good comment???

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