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We've Come This Far
We've come this far,
hand and hand we reached for the stars,
told time and time again this world is ours,
now pay attention keep your mind in charge.
Absorb the knowledge this world has to offer,
be the one this world has to offer,
when they ask for someone who's ideas are larger,
than the new world order, rich men prosper.
Good Writing
Welcome to post poems dot org slash user...looking forward to your next penning - Lady A
reread 06/28/20--you asked for a critique: "hand and hand" a unique image - original avoiding cliche, followed by a cliche. End line at "reaching." ...for the stars...is a great title for a poem, however. Punctuation. Fix line lengths. Use lower case when line continues - does it automatically. I wrestle with it. Rich women can prosper using larger ideas. I'm just sayin'. A lot of large ideated male USA Senators will be writing their books post 11/20. :D