The Reason I Hate You

I can't believe it

How could you?!

I thought our reltionship was going so well

Then you do this to me

I trusted you!

I can't believe you

You betrayed me!

And for that...I HATE YOU!

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Kiera Contreni's picture

Oh wow... I bet that you wrote that, when your boyfriend cheated on you. Don't you hate it when guys do that? I hope that it didn't sound bitchy. I like it, I like the teenaged angst and everything, very nice.

Charlotte Parrish's picture

Hi I think this is really good.I know the feelings expressed in this poem. You expressed them well.
Glad you like my poem thanks charlotte