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i hate that i hate you
I hate the way you look at me
I hate the way you stare
I hate the way you talk to me
I hate it how you don’t care
I hate it when you’re with me
I hate how you’re so unfair
I hate it when you touch me
I hate it when you’re not there
I hate it how you can’t see
That I don’t really hate you
Not even a little bit
Not even at all
The truth of it is I love you
And I hate to see me fall
I hate how I love you
I hate it when you don’t call
I hate it when I think of you
I hate it when I don’t see you at all
I hate how I hate you
I hate that I hate you at all
I hate that I want to be with you
I hate that you didn’t fall.
ahwe.
this ones great.
I know exactly what you mean here.
it reminds me of a certain boy to be completley honest.
I think i remember you writing the first half of it.
and i think you wrote it down somewhere.
like, i have it somewhere or something.
i dunno..
but it's really good catie.
i love you a lot and think of you often.
no matter how creepy that may seem.
I MISS YOU SO MUCH. <3
Love this piece. Could relate to it too - there's someone I feel like all that about... but if this person is not careful they really WILL drive me right over the edge and I really WILL hate them.
Sorry for that, critiquing YOUR poetry is not the place for ME to moan about MY OWN problems! It's just that this poem of yours made me think (I'd be real pleased if anyone said that about any of my pieces!).
Great stuff,
Take care,
alisha x