A New Morning

A new morning, full of reflection and rennassiance is calling my name

It speaks to me as if we have been together for years

It caresses my back, tickles my feet

It pours sweet words into my soul

and then it holds me

This new morning is full of expectation and impatient reassurance

Full of ideas,fears,tears

This new morning is full of hope and it is so optimistic that it will never inhance my dreams, it will never reveal the radiance of life

Instead it will be my weight, my chains, my bloody hands

Author's Notes/Comments: 

I haven't written in a while. This is my first attempt to "get back on the horse."

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David W Jones's picture

An interesting poem. I love the way you describe things, full of detail and perfect at allowing the reader to actually feel how you felt when writing it. The last few lines are curious. I'm not entirely sure how to interpret it. Either way I really like it. ^_^

Eric Duerr's picture

Great to see you BACK on the writing horse, I haven't been writing much at all except for class...I've just been too exhausted. Hope to read more from you!!!