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the motions are fluid

my thoughts, however, are not

and I am afraid that I am getting lines on my face

and if that is the case then it is about time for me to

GROW UP

GO OUT

GET THINGS STARTED

but how can I?

because I have these lines forming on my face

around my eyes and mouth and on my forehead and I can't even smile anymore

and you know what that means?

It means that I blinked and it was all over

and if this is all true, then it is about time for me to

quiet down

fade away

burn out

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This one is a work in progress!

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©10 December 2001 - 5:28pm — catclo15
9 November 2003 - 4:52pm — David W Jones (not verified)
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I like this one as well. It does seem to be a familiar feeling, I'm sure if that's a good or bad thing. ;)

27 January 2002 - 6:52pm — Eric Duerr (not verified)
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I like the "ranting" style of this one actually, I think it would flow a little better in a prose-poetry type form though...nice stuff!

27 January 2002 - 6:52pm — Eric Duerr (not verified)
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I like the "ranting" style of this one actually, I think it would flow a little better in a prose-poetry type form though...nice stuff!