what the fuck was i thinking
when i told you i loved you,
gave you my all,
called you my everything,
you ran along with your friends
left me there all alone
drownding in the tears i shed
but now the tears are gone
they turned into hate
and soon you'll be dead
as i pull the trigger to your head
you'll be drowning in blood
Good poetry but if you are planning to enter it in anything you might want to change the colorful language involved. :)