Fruit Stand

Fruit Stand



A red barn set back from any road,

fronted by asphalt, a rude black scar

littered by cars.



I walk quietly past stalls,

obscenely clean floors, farmers in slacks

running adding machines.



Out to fields stitched with trees,

I stoop to grasp rich, black loam

as a stranger ambles by.



I fight back the urge to run after,

crying, “What have I done to merit your scorn?”

for fear he might answer.



© 6/16/00 Bart Breen

Author's Notes/Comments: 

ANother poem inspired in the midst of reading Robert Bly.  I think this works better than some others I attempted to change and draw an ironic twist at the end.

Designed to show the hyper-self awareness carried by those who draw their self-image from others.  Otherwise known as co-dependence.

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